5. Jamison's research essay claims that art and music classes should be required for all students in every grade. He has outlined his first body paragraph. What error can you find in his outline? II. Students should be exposed to world cultures through music and art. A. Classic art from ancient times a. Greek architecture b. Indian carvings c. Asian statues and metal work B. Music influences from other continents a. African rhythms and melodies b. Medieval chants

The error in Jamison's outline is that the subpoints under section II (A and B) do not clearly connect to the main point of exposing students to world cultures through music and art. While the examples provided (Greek architecture, Indian carvings, Asian statues, African rhythms, and medieval chants) do represent different cultures, they are not explicitly tied back to the idea of how these art forms and music can enhance students' understanding and appreciation of world cultures. To improve the outline, Jamison could clarify how each example contributes to cultural exposure and understanding. For instance, he could add explanations or context for each subpoint that directly relates to the benefits of learning about these cultures through their art and music. This would strengthen the argument and ensure that each point supports the main claim effectively.